The piece I would like to revise is the one I wrote in the second quarter that was about hunting. This is a haiku poem I wrote. My ideas in writing this came from thinking of my best friend Matt because he always hunts and I know he even cleans his kills. So I wrote about it...
Hunting
Pheasants everywhere
All hearing the CRACK of guns
Darting for tall corn
... In this piece i thought I could've gone back and revised it and used some better and bigger words. I also could've used some bigger adjectives to describe my nouns.
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